a hug and a smile
at just the right time
checking to make sure
that i'm doing fine
and i am
with your concern
when i'm here with my brothers
my sisters here with me

laughing together
fighting sometimes
its normal,
not harsh
and come a problem
the anger
turns to care
to hugs and smiles
and kind words

and if i find
I need someone
you're there
to talk to me

But even if
we all are fine
just to sit and laugh
with you
is fine
by me.

A moment to share
in memory
A connection
between you and me
One moment, one place
and now i know
this is the place
that i should be
here with my brothers,
my sisters here with me

Would I stay here?
forever...
if only I could
here with you
and not matter
to the rest of the world
if the rest of the world
wont matter to me

for here is where I love to be
and wherever i go
whatever i see
I know i'll always rather be
here with my brothers
my sisters here with me

It has a certain style to it that I like.
Quite sentimental.

thanks... i think it needs a little editing but i'm not one to edit my poetry its kinda... i write it and then its final.

Nice, feels very postmodern. As though you could sing this with the feel of Paul McCartney's Here Today.

wow i wrote that?
dang thats long.... not bad *narcissim*

lmao, narcissicism.