Lost love
is not love lost
but rather love... not returned

Outpouring of emotions
shunned
by ungrateful recipients
pining after others.

(This wasn't going to be quite so short but it seemed to end well there)

It's really hard to comment on a poem. All you end up with is something meaningless like, "That is really cool and emotionful. It works really well to express that mood."

Well, maybe that wasn't so meaningless. But still.

yeah i know what you mean... its hard to interpret the poem when the poet is... well... alive... cause they might be mad if you interpret it wrong... i just like posting stuff here cause I seem to get more feedback then when i post it on my blog

Nice, very Basho.